1 files changed, 22 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/src/routes/shared.ts b/src/routes/shared.ts
index 5d20dd6..caefe05 100644
--- a/src/routes/shared.ts
+++ b/src/routes/shared.ts
@@ -305,22 +305,34 @@ export const ttyLines: TTYText[] = (() => {
   wait(1000);
   clear();
   text(
-    [`Hi! I'm a`],
-    [''],
+    [`Hi! `],
+    ['I\'m'],
     [
-      ` software developer.\nI do shit like the hellhole you're seeing right now, amongst other things.\n\n`,
+      ` a software developer.\n`,
     ],
+    ['I do'],
+    [
+      ` shit like the hellhole the reader is seeing right now, amongst other things.\n\n`
+    ]
   );
   wait(300);
-  for (const c of ' transfem'.split('')) {
+  for (const c of 'This one is'.split('').map((_, i, a) => a.slice(0, i + 1).join(''))) {
+    replaceLast((l) => {
+      l[1][0] = l[1][0].substring(c.length) + c;
+      return l;
+    });
+    wait(70);
+  }
+  wait(300);
+  for (const c of 'It does'.split('').map((_, i, a) => a.slice(0, i + 1).join(''))) {
     replaceLast((l) => {
-      l[1][0] += c;
+      l[3][0] = l[3][0].substring(c.length) + c;
       return l;
     });
     wait(70);
   }
   text([
-    'Places you can find me:',
+    'Places the reader can find it:',
     {
       colour: '#7a7a7a',
     },
@@ -383,7 +395,7 @@ export const ttyLines: TTYText[] = (() => {
   );
   wait(600);
   text([
-    '\nYou may find these useful:',
+    '\nThe reader may find these useful:',
     {
       colour: '#7a7a7a',
     },
@@ -521,7 +533,7 @@ export const ttyLines: TTYText[] = (() => {
   ]);
   wait(100);
   text([
-    '\nDid you know: this is all pure css animation hell.',
+    '\nFun fact: this is all pure css animation hell.',
     {
       colour: '#7a7a7a',
     },
@@ -531,14 +543,14 @@ export const ttyLines: TTYText[] = (() => {
     `<button style="padding: 12px 12px;background: #fff2;margin-top: 0.4rem;border-radius: 0.7rem;opacity:0.1;margin-top:3rem;" data-el="le funny button">have a button :3</button>`,
     {
       raw: true,
-      url: () => alert('i abused too much css for this i wanna cry now'),
+      url: () => alert('it abused too much css for this it wants to cry now'),
     },
   ]);
   wait(200);
   text(
     { renderrestriction: 'js-only' },
     [
-      'next time, you may want to ',
+      'next time, the reader may want to ',
       {
         colour: '#fff2',
       },